The poem i made for my cousin for her minor subject.
The Good Cousin...
My cousin Alma asked me to do her assignment yesterday because she's so busy and she said that she could not cope up with all her school requirements anymore--cousin is a nursing student so it's not really that shocking if she has lot of things to do ... So being a kind cousin and having not much to do, i said 'yes'... Well, it's not really that hard thing to do eh.. Their teacher asked them to make a poem.. not really a good poet but I do write some sometimes... and here's the one i made for my dear cousin:
God's Greatest Artwork
In a far away land,
I saw two people holding hands...
They were so sweet to each other
And no one had the courage to bother...
The girl pushed the boy a while after
But the boy ran and hugged her,
Wiped her eyes full of tears...
Suddenly, she smile with no fears..
There I saw how much they love each other
And how much they care for one another...
I was amazed of how love really works...
It was, indeed, God's greatest artwork.
The boy kissed the girl on the forehead,
and her cheeks turned into red...
They walked again holding hands,
and found their way to the promised land...
Well, it's more of a story than a poem... Just couldn't think of something to write to so i had decided to write something about her-- her lovelife... and so that's the story of her lovelife.. hehehe... oh! the last stanza's a lilbit funny... my friend resty commented that it sounds awkward... i just thought the word "promised land" rhymns on the above line plus it could best descibe on a situation where in the couples have really decided to keep their relationship forever...
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God's Greatest Artwork
In a far away land,
I saw two people holding hands...
They were so sweet to each other
And no one had the courage to bother...
The girl pushed the boy a while after
But the boy ran and hugged her,
Wiped her eyes full of tears...
Suddenly, she smile with no fears..
There I saw how much they love each other
And how much they care for one another...
I was amazed of how love really works...
It was, indeed, God's greatest artwork.
The boy kissed the girl on the forehead,
and her cheeks turned into red...
They walked again holding hands,
and found their way to the promised land...
Well, it's more of a story than a poem... Just couldn't think of something to write to so i had decided to write something about her-- her lovelife... and so that's the story of her lovelife.. hehehe... oh! the last stanza's a lilbit funny... my friend resty commented that it sounds awkward... i just thought the word "promised land" rhymns on the above line plus it could best descibe on a situation where in the couples have really decided to keep their relationship forever...
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